Sunday, December 02, 2007


photo: Martin G. Wienert; summer 2007






last summer . . .
my fading tan
in the shower

(AW; December 2007)

thank you Bill, Lary and all who discussed with me different versions!



p.s.: and another version

At year end
my fading tan
in the shower

(AW; Asahi, January 2008)

David McMurray wrote: "German poet Angelika Wienert effectively takes her reader to summer and back in a flash."
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7 comments:

  1. Masago3:59 AM

    Remnants of a previous season. Nice.

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  2. Ričardas7:10 AM

    Nice. Maybe it's time to refresh your tan somewhere in the south :)

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  3. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)3:35 PM

    thank you very much for your comments!

    i`ve to wait for the next summer in my garden ("somewhere in the south" is too expensive in the moment...)

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  4. Bill5:26 PM

    Great interaction with the photo, angelika.

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  5. Pan Haiku Review7:36 PM

    A really good haiku that so many of us can relate to! ;-)

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  6. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)9:13 AM

    thank you, Bill and Alan!

    let us look forward to the summer 2008

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  7. Anonymous4:22 PM

    winter drizzle
    a circle grows larger
    above the koi

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