Saturday, November 08, 2008


dull day dia sombrio dull day dia sombrio dull day dia sombrio




Dull day -
 orphan-home
 needs paint

(AW)




Dia sombrio -
 o orfanato
 precisa de pintura

(AW; translation: Rosa Clement, Brazil)






published some years ago

here more:

http://www.sumauma.net/haijins/haiku-angelika.html
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10 comments:

  1. Masago2:44 AM

    Malhela tago -
    la ofroejo bezonas
    farbigxi.

    (AW; Esperanto translation: Vaughn Seward, Canada)

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  2. John McDonald9:58 AM

    nice one angelika
    john

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  3. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)11:37 AM

    thank you very much, Vaughn and John!

    the Esperanto-translation is so interesting! thank you, Vaughn!

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  4. Janice Thomson5:43 PM

    Good one Angelika.

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  5. Tikkis6:36 PM

    Tylsä päivä -
    orpokoti
    kaipaa maalia

    Here word kaipaa could be said also tarvitsee... but kaipaa is also synonym for longing for ; I think it is a good word with an orphan-home?

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  6. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)9:02 PM

    thank you, Janice!

    thank you, Tikkis! how kind of you to translate it!

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  7. Gillena Cox6:06 PM

    nice use of resonance

    much love
    gillena

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  8. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)10:35 PM

    thank you very much, Gillena!

    *******************

    p.s.: we had snow today (and heavy wind)! our garden was white (for half an hour ...)

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  9. Bill2:51 PM

    Still good.

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  10. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)11:07 AM

    thank you, Bill!

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