photo: Martin G. Wienert; the Duisburg-Nord Landscape Park (May 2009)former smelting works
a victorious conqueror
this green
(AW, May 2009)
http://www.landschaftspark.de/en/derpark/index.html
photo: Martin G. Wienert; the Duisburg-Nord Landscape Park (May 2009)
schönen Platz, den ich liebte das Bild.
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Ich komme aus Brasilien
Im Sinne einer puristischen Haiku-Lehre wäre die Aussage in Zeile 2 und 3 eine Interpretation, die einem Haiku nicht angemessen ist. Aber was zählen diese überkommenen Urteile heute noch? Entscheidend ist die poetische Wirklichkeit.
ReplyDeleteIch schaffe es leider nicht meinen Kommentar ins Englische zu übersetzen.
Herzlichen Gruß
Rudi
the greenery is very cooling to the eyes and the shapes very fetching
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gillena
lovely one
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Thank you for your comments!
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, Ricardo!
_If we allow it, the green overcomes, here, though, it enhances the skill of the masons.
ReplyDelete_I love the thought the "conquering green," Grand! _m
In an old technique something from long ago appears and seems to exist forever. This garden will be brown and dead next late harvest - but it will come back: in a different way, but without the help of man. Very deep going haiku, Angelika. Will probably find more, the longer I think about it.
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Ralf
A fine combination of photo and verse, Angelika :)
ReplyDeleteNature finally wins over human works, i guess
wishes,
devika
Thank you very much, Devika, Magyar and Ralf!
ReplyDeletenice imagery. you're haikus are very good
ReplyDeleteNice to meet you, E.J.Winston!
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for your kind words!
Magyar and Ralf said it already!
ReplyDeleteThis mighty green is also 'eating' CO2 and making it's part in this struggling against the global warming?
Love the thoughts here Angelika. The idea of the green conquering is so appealing in every aspect.
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