Thursday, September 23, 2010

photo: Martin G. Wienert -- grass in our garden (2010)

Autumn breeze --
all these age spots
on my hands

(AW, 2010)


Gillena Cox said...

enjoyed; interesting juxtaposition

much love

Ralf Bröker said...

Great image against this stupid saying that a man is as old as he feels, and a woman as old as she looks. Here we see that there is no acceptable alternative to aging ... I take my hat off to this haiku.

Best wishes

PS: You're right. You are in place :-)

Anonymous said...

I can see these age spots on the photo. So the ku comes close to a haiga. I agree to Gillena Cox: This spotted bamboo(?) and these age spots fit very well.

Best wishes

Masago said...


haiku-shelf said...

Thank you so much for your comments, your thoughts!

Best wishes,

p.s.: It's not bamboo, Rudi. It's a kind of grass, Miscanthus sinensis Strictus.

Jessica said...

Love the honest of this piece. and the photo works so well with it . .
Thought you might find my blog interesting. Dysfunctional Beginnings. - about growing up, and beginnings of all kinds. We've survived it. Now let's attest to it.

Anonymous said...

This strikes me as just right.
I like what you did with this template, too.

Henrique Pimenta said...

Gostei do breve - e intenso...

Magyar said...

__I look down... to see a new spot, not there a moment [a season] ago; Autumn.

A fine one! _m

John McDonald said...

great catch Angelika

Fancy said...

Ever so beautiful!

Marinela Reka said...

Lovely writing!
Enjoyed your blog, great work :)

emily garnhart said...
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haiku-shelf said...

Thank you for your comments!

Good wishes for you and you and...all!


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