dull day dia sombrio dull day dia sombrio dull day dia sombrio
Dull day -
orphan-home
needs paint
(AW)
Dia sombrio -
o orfanato
precisa de pintura
(AW; translation: Rosa Clement, Brazil)
published some years ago
here more:
http://www.sumauma.net/haijins/haiku-angelika.html
10 comments:
Malhela tago -
la ofroejo bezonas
farbigxi.
(AW; Esperanto translation: Vaughn Seward, Canada)
nice one angelika
john
thank you very much, Vaughn and John!
the Esperanto-translation is so interesting! thank you, Vaughn!
Good one Angelika.
Tylsä päivä -
orpokoti
kaipaa maalia
Here word kaipaa could be said also tarvitsee... but kaipaa is also synonym for longing for ; I think it is a good word with an orphan-home?
thank you, Janice!
thank you, Tikkis! how kind of you to translate it!
nice use of resonance
much love
gillena
thank you very much, Gillena!
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p.s.: we had snow today (and heavy wind)! our garden was white (for half an hour ...)
Still good.
thank you, Bill!
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