Im Sinne einer puristischen Haiku-Lehre wäre die Aussage in Zeile 2 und 3 eine Interpretation, die einem Haiku nicht angemessen ist. Aber was zählen diese überkommenen Urteile heute noch? Entscheidend ist die poetische Wirklichkeit. Ich schaffe es leider nicht meinen Kommentar ins Englische zu übersetzen.
In an old technique something from long ago appears and seems to exist forever. This garden will be brown and dead next late harvest - but it will come back: in a different way, but without the help of man. Very deep going haiku, Angelika. Will probably find more, the longer I think about it.
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schönen Platz, den ich liebte das Bild.
Ricardo
Ich komme aus Brasilien
Im Sinne einer puristischen Haiku-Lehre wäre die Aussage in Zeile 2 und 3 eine Interpretation, die einem Haiku nicht angemessen ist. Aber was zählen diese überkommenen Urteile heute noch? Entscheidend ist die poetische Wirklichkeit.
Ich schaffe es leider nicht meinen Kommentar ins Englische zu übersetzen.
Herzlichen Gruß
Rudi
the greenery is very cooling to the eyes and the shapes very fetching
much love
gillena
lovely one
john
Thank you for your comments!
Nice to meet you, Ricardo!
_If we allow it, the green overcomes, here, though, it enhances the skill of the masons.
_I love the thought the "conquering green," Grand! _m
In an old technique something from long ago appears and seems to exist forever. This garden will be brown and dead next late harvest - but it will come back: in a different way, but without the help of man. Very deep going haiku, Angelika. Will probably find more, the longer I think about it.
Best wishes
Ralf
A fine combination of photo and verse, Angelika :)
Nature finally wins over human works, i guess
wishes,
devika
Thank you very much, Devika, Magyar and Ralf!
nice imagery. you're haikus are very good
Nice to meet you, E.J.Winston!
And thank you for your kind words!
Magyar and Ralf said it already!
This mighty green is also 'eating' CO2 and making it's part in this struggling against the global warming?
Love the thoughts here Angelika. The idea of the green conquering is so appealing in every aspect.
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