photo: Martin G. Wienert; Schloss Dyck (June 2009)
near the lake -- two boys count their mosquito bites (AW, 2009)
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I like this "karumi", this late style of Basho (in German "Leichtigkeit"). And I remind of Issa who suffered of mosquitoes. This ku is a hommage on Issa as well.
Being proud is human. Some count bites, others count other things. Soon these boys might receive some medals. Hopefully they did well in sports ... Nice one, Angelika!
photo: Martin G. Wienert; Schloss Dyck (June 2009)
10 comments:
I like this "karumi", this late style of Basho (in German "Leichtigkeit"). And I remind of Issa who suffered of mosquitoes. This ku is a hommage on Issa as well.
Well done!
Rudi
Being proud is human. Some count bites, others count other things. Soon these boys might receive some medals. Hopefully they did well in sports ... Nice one, Angelika!
Best wishes
Ralf
mosquito
buzzes at my ear
turn the page
Another good one Angelika _m
I was about to say it reminds of verses by Tikkis and then Tikkis is an absolute Issa fan, i guess...& Rudi confirms it :)
wishes,
devika
gave me a chuckle
much love
gillena
ha-ha- so true
john
Thank you so much for your comments!
Best wishes,
Angelika
The photo makes me start scratching. The rainy summer has brought us lots of mosquitoes. The ku is very good. too
mosquito–
the long road
to nirvana
warm summer day --
swarm of mosquitoes
on duty
ps. I wrote also a variation L2:
"just mosquitoes"
perhaps a better?
Ps2:
This photographer of yours: neat work!
Fabulous, how you can make me itch with such an economy of words!
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