Sunday, August 11, 2013

countryside near Neuss (photo: Martin G. Wienert)

roll of thunder
the field mouse finds 
a place to hide

(AW, August 2013)


Bill said...

I like it, Angelika, the way it allows us to see ourselves in the field mouse. Evocative photo, too.

haiku-shelf said...

Thank you, Bill!

(and I will tell Martin what you wrote about the photo)

Best wishes,

Stephanie Force said...

It's a very nice poem, and with a little tweaking it could be an amazing haiku! I love it nonetheless(:

haiku-shelf said...

Thanks for your comment, Stephanie!

Do you prefer 5-7-5 haiku?

Ivan Pylat said...

I recently came across your blog and have been reading along. I thought I would leave my first comment. I don’t know what to say except that I have enjoyed reading. Nice blog:)

haiku-shelf said...

Thank's a lot, Ivan!