Sunday, December 02, 2007


photo: Martin G. Wienert; summer 2007






last summer . . .
my fading tan
in the shower

(AW; December 2007)

thank you Bill, Lary and all who discussed with me different versions!



p.s.: and another version

At year end
my fading tan
in the shower

(AW; Asahi, January 2008)

David McMurray wrote: "German poet Angelika Wienert effectively takes her reader to summer and back in a flash."







7 comments:

Masago said...

Remnants of a previous season. Nice.

Ričardas said...

Nice. Maybe it's time to refresh your tan somewhere in the south :)

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

thank you very much for your comments!

i`ve to wait for the next summer in my garden ("somewhere in the south" is too expensive in the moment...)

best wishes,
Angelika

Bill said...

Great interaction with the photo, angelika.

Area 17 said...

A really good haiku that so many of us can relate to! ;-)

haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...

thank you, Bill and Alan!

let us look forward to the summer 2008

best wishes,
Angelika

Anonymous said...

winter drizzle
a circle grows larger
above the koi